Sorry for the late review, i was busy.

Anyways great chapter. I still like Dre. . . he's awsome
--Belle

::waves fans with a big thumbs up painted on them:: WHOO, GO-GO-GO, PET! Heh, sry... Just wanna express how me like chapter. ^__^ Subtle in telling background of characters without boring people out...(At least, that's what happen to me when I read some fics...)

Cool chapter. Thanks for sending me the e-mail that you updated. I appreciate it. And if you would continue to do so that's fine with me.

I was almost sad to see the sphinx go at first glance, but now i'm glad she's dead. I love the line Dre says:

"Two rather hungry, irritated people." Dre squeezed my shoulder again and I knew he was smiling now.

I laughed quite a bit at that line.

Good job and keep up the good work

--Belle the Shadow-Cat

::Even the darkest Light leaves a Shadow::

Aww 2 down for repairs. That's too bad. But anyways, this is a great start, and you use the 'i' form wonderfully. Dre's and interesting character i must say. Write more

--Belle the Shadow-Cat

Well done ::applauds:: Giving some information on the characters and showing more of their personality bit by bit.

I LOVED this chapter, whoo! Already got me into some action and you left a lovely end for a new beginning. Can't wait to read more! (Characters are awesome, heh.)

nice job! this is really good...
hehe, i like ur characters and ur "way" of entering into the land..quite different then the ideas i have heard...nj and congrats on ur work...
I,
Slade

*clap* Yay Pet!!

I already brought a few mistakes to your attention I believe. I like it. How did the vamp get the better of Dre, though? He had the hand arcs.

Anywho, to steal your word...

Cheers!
Swarvoski