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| Tee Elle Double Yew 2008-04-26 ch 16,  | abuseI'm enamored with this story, I couldn't stop reading it but it is a shame it hasn't been updated in such a long time. Are you going to keep going with it? |
| blackrose214 2007-12-21 ch 16, | abuseHey there! I read this story as fast as I could - it`s great. Not that I exprected anything less from you... but still... the last upate was so long ago already... :( Why did you drop it? And Dark illustrations, too. T_T Please. please, please continue and finish them. PLESAE! |
| Maiden of the Rain 2007-11-22 ch 16, | abuseso...this is deffinatelyone of may favorite stories by you I hope u update soon^_^ |
| Gravilove19 2007-08-26 ch 16, | abuseI really have enjoyed reading your story. I wish there was an update for me to read. (: |
| Amanda 2007-04-14 ch 6, anon. | abuseWhy am I getting the feeling that the new kids at school are evil? And also are possibly the pair at the end of the chapter? |
| Kynn 2006-10-24 ch 16, | abuseGranted, it's been a few days to a year since you've updated this story, and I hope you decide to finish it, but I absolutely love this story. It's original, creative and the characters are real. I can't wait to find out how everything turns out in the end. I hope that you update soon so I can finish your story. This one is one of my favorites right along with DI: SiB. Great work! |
| Deviliscious 2006-10-09 ch 16, | abuseAhh...this is getting to be very, very interesting. I'm liking this! ^_^ I like Falcon but I dunno. Sometimes I find him a bit OOC. I know he's your char and that's how you would portray him to be but I would have expected a few hundred years old vamp to act more...his age. Like for example, when how he acted when facing the Russian boys' father. Falcon acted as if he was below the mortal. I understand he had to act that way when Ivan didn't now better, but after he had known, Falcon still addressed Ivan as 'Sir', giving respect to someone who was far younger than him and who was mortal. But this is just my opinion. Other than this fact, I absolutely enjoy reading your story. So update soon, ya? ^_^ |
| Celestia Silver 2006-06-24 ch 16, | abuseSaying that I'm In Love with this story wouold be a great understatment. I'll die if you dont update soon!Oh, and could you put a little *or a lot* more romance between Falcon and Malachite? Please? Thanx, Your Newest and Biggest Fan, Arulia Senshade. |
| HelenofPylos 2006-06-15 ch 16, | abuseOh my god this is such an amazing story. I really wish you would update. Falcon is so cool! |
| Lady Psychic 2006-05-10 ch 16, | abuseWow, this is an awesome and intertaining story. It took me a while, but I read all that you have written so far. Anyways, I hope you shall contiue with this story soon. |
| Rialet 2006-03-15 ch 7, | abuseI like the Russians better now. |
| Rialet 2006-03-15 ch 5, | abuseYou do regional dialects very well. I'm not sure I like the support cast in this one as much as the other stories though. |
| Starchild-183 2006-02-25 ch 16, | abuseI love this story! Falcon is the best character I've ever read! Please update ASAP! |
| volublereticence 2006-02-22 ch 16, | abuseThis is a great story! I read it all in around two nights... i had to sleep part of those nights however. I hope you continue with it soon! |
| Irenthel 2006-01-18 ch 15, anon. | abuseDamn, you're good. Another genius work from the mind of Xandra-san. But you need to update! ^_^ |