YEA AN UPDATE!

This was a great chapter! I'm really interested in seeing what your plannig with the whole "Binding Lenoir to Chite". Poor Chite, though. They rally do seem to stick him with everything, don't they? But the symbol is pretty awesome and it'd make for a wicked tattoo (if your not a vampire that is).

Anyway, once again, great chapter! This update totally made my day!

Update again as soon as you can.

BEST REGARDS

Wow. Cool diagram Really nice chapter as expected Yeay now Chite has a slave. Waking up was the worst part. I wonder what's gonna happen? Pavel's gonna show up and do something to Lenoir? or is there going to be an enemy? Or is lenoir gonna contact more enemies. hmm Well, just can't wait to see what happens next

Too long have I been without the comfort of a Xandra update. *sighs* I LOVE this chapter. Lenoir's going to be a rather interesting addition. _

Anou... okay, the part with Falcon and the whirlwind... "And, closing his eyes, the air between them reared back tangibly, then exploded forth. The psychic blast created a ripple effect in the twister, some of the passing articles flying free of it, others shifting from their orbital paths to collide with each other."

I couldn't really get that. I tried out a few different pictures in my mind, but honestly, that description didn't make sense to me.

But the rest - perfect. _ I laughed so hard this chapter... and freaked out a little too, at the beginning when he was going after Peter. I think I'll read it over. ;)

Chippie

Awesome. Look forward to the next part. :D

I'm too lazy to log on. (sigh) So, another great chapter. Though I only read about a 1/4 of the way through sice I'm sitting five feet away from a school official and lunch bells rings in 5 seconds. Make that 2, love this a lot, got to go, I'll get the Nigel plushie done soon!

I thought it was just fine and I didn't notice any flow or fluency problems _. I really like this story (especially Falcon) and are they really going to school tomorrow? I find that funny for some reason ; I look forward to the next update!

Great! Keep writing!

Yeah an update i could kiss you!

Hey, that means Chite and everyone is located right where I live! Omigod, hyperventilation...ack! What's gonna happen! I'm so worried now! I don't know whether to squeal from the fluff or cry from the angst or worry from the situation at hand! .

what! that's it! you HAVE to update soon. please please please? or i won't be able to sleep! i loved this chapter. lenoir is a great character. and i like the budding relationship between our two lead characters ) hehe) write more soon!

o! I love this! VERY well done! It's all just so...nifty! Oh! and when Peter dressed up it remnded me of a song! Cherry Lips by Garbage! Just the part of the song that goes "Such a delicate boy in a hysterical realm" and then "with your cherry lips and golden curls"...good song...I highly reccomend it! well anyways...update soon please!

Wow, That was really REALLY great! I've enjoyed your story. It got really exciting after that. Hmm... your knowledge on phsychology really help you alot in most of your stories. Wow, the sectors that BIG! I bet this story is not at its end yet and I am ethuastic that it isn't. Hope it'll be as long as DI! Oh! Love DI to bits. Even enjoy reading back like 3 times already! P but only on my favourite parts. Keep it up and I'll definately wait for your continues chapter! Keep it up

I like this story, too! Chite is cool XP and I love his name. Although after sleeping in a coffin on top of Falcon maybe he'll stop trying to deny the lurve XP Already every other thought in his brain is how hawt Falcon is XDD Too bad Falcon hasn't caught any of those yet (or at least has been too polite to say so). The two of them amuse me to no end

HOLY CRAP, i could die out of love for this story! I mean its so good, i love Falcon and Chite is so cute. And I was so glad Jasper was okay. Anywho fab story, update soon. :D

For the record, I like the romantic parts... I mean, this is a shounen ai/slash fiction, ain't it? Sorry, there has to be some magical moments of fluff in it, otherwise it'll lose its m/m appeal that it had promised in the blurb- it can't be action and thrillingly exciting all the time, can't it? Though, this is a partly a mystery-supernatural fiction, I'd say there's a good balance here. Just be careful with where the plot will be headed, because at the moment, I'm still guessing on where this is going... but I guess this is intentional, isn't it- trying to keep us on our toes? _

Secondly, on more personal levels... KEEPER! I was gonna use that word in Willowbrooke! ;_; KEEPER! Oh well... you beat me to it anyway, so it's back to the drawing board- don't worry, I'll use another term... it's just that I already placed it in the poem at the start of my fiction. ;; Coincidences... either you love 'em or loathe 'em...

Oh... damn. Left on a cliff-hanger... now I'm eager to find out what's gona happen next. That pedophile better not lay a finger on Peter- seriously! *shudders* I just hope you made Peter to be more alert than I'd thought, so he'd wake up on time and bash his ass in. ;; Anyway, good chapter, I love the awkward moments between Chite and Falcon (Ni-i-i-i-i-i-i-i-ice...).

And glad Jasper's okay- and funny thing though, I just read a Wiccan book about names... I saw Jasper in the list, and it says that naming someone that increases chances of survival and endurance. I thought it would be interesting to note.

Though, I digress, poor Falcon- (Damnit Chite! You get to comfort him! *mutters something about lucky bastards*)... the past hurts. ;; Poor Hawk too... hate it when children get involved. -_-;;

I knew Chite wouldn't be out of the woods yet- I should really be saying 'Malachite' whilst on that note. Oh well, at least Falcon would be there to protect him. _ Good chapter, nice moments- happy with those Falcon/Chite interactions... and a sure way to verbally backhand that Lenior...“Oh, and by the way…if I was going to let anyone bite me, it would be Falcon-not you.” - Loved that line. ;;

Update soon when you feel the drive to- I mean that. Take care, later and I'll be looking forward to the next installment. _ Toodles!

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