WAHH! *smacks head on table* NOW I know who L is! And I wasn't even thinking about this story when it happened! Gods, what is WRONG with my brain? *goes off muttering to self* Well, I think I need to go back on Ritaline...

Chippie

Chite is such an IDIOT!

I've been saying as soon as I read about the whole guy killing people close to Falcon and he was on 'I' I immedietly thought Ivan and then 'J' was next and then I went,

"Oh SHIT Jasper!"

Duh!

Dosent Chite know his fucking alphabets? That should have been the first thing that came to mind.

What a dumbass.

GOD I'm pissed now.

But other than that I _love_ your story it's awsome. Hurry up and update already!

Another great story! Keep on going at it!

Hoi..you just HAD to end it right there, didn't you? You just had to! Mou, Jasper is COOL! DUDEE! And when are Falcon and Chite gonna get together? Just curious.

I mean, this is a really intriuging story! It's kept me on my toes, and when my dad made me get off the computer for a minute to do something when they were going to save Ivan, I was breathing so fast he thought something was wrong with me

I don't know how long it'll take you to update, but please do it soon! I am in love with your story!

Wow this is good I couldn't stop reading. UPDATE SOON!

This is really, really good, can't wait for more.

NO! No killing or maiming of Jasper! Kill the Biology professor, his name starts with a J. Jerard, that's it. Kill him, he's mean (though he can quickly disperse large annoying crowds). He's disposable.

Finally got to reviewing, whoo! Sorry, this one slipped my mind. -_-;;

Good, Ivan's staying alive, despite being in intensive care. The ABC Manslayer has so gotta die... XP Pavel's a afraid needles- Ha! Funny thought. Good job with the blood-grouping thing too. - Well explained.

Ahh, for my favorite part: something between Falcon and Chite! Ha! XD Romantic in a fiesty way. Nice way to show some implications of the romance (Read: Romantic! XD). And you're tellin' ME that two certain characters of mine need to hook up fast! XD

ONe way to get an answer out of a blood-sucking pedophile... *shudders* Ooh that was nasty. But I digress... GO FALCON! Rowl!

Jasper! No! That creep better not touch one hair on him! Grr! - (Sakura: No-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o! *runs to hug Jasper* Not him! No!) Ha!

Anyway, nice chapter. - Hope there's more coming soon. Update as fast as you can. _

Neutral Shades

WOAH! Didn't mean to offend ya, babe. just bein' honest. Honest! You're a fabulous writer, I just don't wanna see your work messed up by incorrect Russian or anything! I swear! As far as the Russian rulers go, again, it's Anglicizing the names. Peter the Great is the English version of Pyotr Bolshoy, his Russian name. All I'm saying about Peter is that Peter is the English varient of a Biblical name, and Piotr is the Russian variant of it (It goes on in a bunch of other languages, Pierre in French, Deiter in German, Pedro in Spanish). Pavel is the Russian varient of Paul. Didn't mean to piss ya off. Seriously!

Hey there, Xandra! Sorry for not reviewing. My net's out. So I put this together after I saved a copy of this chapter to disk. I'm in CW class right now. _ Well, as I read the story, (and these may be all out of order because this is the second time I've read the chapter through) these are some general thoughts/things I noticed:

First of all: Why does Falcon's hide-out have electricity?

Canned vampire! _

replace some of the he's and him's with pronouns - it isn't always obvious until afterward who you're talking about.

Yay Chite! (at the part where he stopped Falcon from leaving him)

I think you need to reread this and fix up the flow. (I hate when people say this to me, but flow is very important.)

It seems everyone kinda forgot Chite's full name is Malachite... I remember Aureaté saying he was out of reach already in a previous chapter.

I love how everyone in Pavel's POV is a stupid American. (baka gaijin!)

"Crystal had a saying-‘Don’t ask for answers you won’t like’" It explains itself. Don't overdo it.

When I first read that part, I thought, "I didn't know Chite could drive..." Well, guess I was right! _

During the interrogation... Falcon really is on his high horse. _;;

“I did carry you in my arms for a good ten minutes.” It took me a while to figure out that was last chapter.

Ooh, bad guy has a name...!

Okay, Ivan, Jasper... Kelseigh? L... (wakarinai!) M - Malachite. Wowwie, getting close.

No! No, you CAN'T do that! Evil, EVIL Xandra! (Though personally I don't think anything can happen to him, unless he invites the vamp inside... maybe you're using this to further the plot in another way? ...I'm thinking Chite's siblings are finally going to learn about Falcon... darou?)

That's all, done ranting. And you better update soon! I'm going crazy, what with not having any internet, reading good stories is all that's keeping me alive (besides writing my own). And you're my favorite author on fictionpress, so you must live up to my image of you, okay? _ Sorry if I scared you with this. Ja mata!

Chippie

I Love the story!

update!

so good. This is amazing. But you didn't fool me. Ever since the "game" was mentioned, I checked all of the characters' names. I KNEW Ivan would be next, followed by Jasper, my absolute fav. guy. _ Well, I'm definitely "staying tuned."

you ARE evil! Leaving us with Jasper...great chapter!

Okay, so usually I'm pretty bad about reviewing. I get all excited about reading then somehow something comes up and I'm too busy or too tired or too hungry to review. Horrible, right? But after reading this chapter... Wow. I adore you. Absolutely. You totally rock.

my review got cut short... .o