I read your chapter a few days ago, but meing that my computer and internet are screwed, I was unable to leave a review. I'm really into this story, it's very well written with just enough details. I loved it!

Very well written! There were a couple spelling mistakes and you used to word "warp" a lot, rather than finding a synonym to replace it occasionally, but otherwise I really, really like the the story. Dark, indeed, but good.

AH! My poor virgin eyes! Nah I'm just playing. I really liked it. I hope you continue your story!