 MAGICAL.NARRATOR. 2009-01-17 . chapter 13this story is adorable. I really like it and it would be very very nice if you could update soon |
 Lady Jazmyne 2006-12-19 . chapter 13 DUDE! I forgot how funny this story is. lmao, i like your conclusion to the whole date thing! It seems like the whole universe doesn't want these two to be happy together but they make the best of their situations and enjoy life anyways! a great chapter and now you need to post the next one since it is december and your last chapter was posting in june so yea ^_^ conclusion? post! ^_^ |
 Vervain B. Aricin 2006-06-10 . chapter 13..."I'm still Hungry"...
Why is it that I love love love the middle of your chapters but the ends...I feel like telling you Kuja is the HOTTEST FF VILLIAN EVER!
I had that warm and fuzzy feeling inside while Kamui and Ayden were at the play. *SIGH* This chapter actually reminded me of one of my dates...I won't get into that one though. The only thing that I think you need to do is WRITE MORE! Loves always!~V |
 Esquirella 2006-06-02 . chapter 13Still feeling their way, but they seem to be getting there. Cool! |
 Esquirella 2006-06-02 . chapter 12LOLOLOL! Loved that A/N! |
 Esquirella 2006-06-02 . chapter 11FINALLY! They understand each other! LOL! |
 Esquirella 2006-06-02 . chapter 10Poor Ayden! |
 Esquirella 2006-06-02 . chapter 9Of course Sachi has to try to spoil everything! I dun like him. LOL |
 Esquirella 2006-06-02 . chapter 8They made up! |
 Esquirella 2006-06-02 . chapter 7I was wondering when we'd see Ayden's family. |
 Esquirella 2006-06-02 . chapter 6Oh no! Things seemed to be going so well too! |
 Esquirella 2006-06-02 . chapter 5Adorable chapter! |
 Esquirella 2006-06-02 . chapter 4LOL! Great delayed reaction! |
 Esquirella 2006-06-02 . chapter 3Uh oh! Sachi's up to something! |
 Esquirella 2006-06-02 . chapter 2I like the pairing. |