Reviews for Forbidden Feelings

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Averi 2004-04-17 ch 8,	Ah yes, that crazy Christian fad. It'll totally blow over in, what, 2 thousand years? Your poems are decent, but yelling at a religion won't make you less angry, sorry. There are millions of Chrisitians in the world--what gives you the authority to decide all of them are "two faced intolerant Jesus Freaks"...and you do know a Jesus freak is a hippie, right? You're being just an intolerant as the ones you claim are intolerant, just as I am being to you. Oh, and by the way, the fundementalists I must assume you're talking about are all strictly anti-clone. Your rage is marketable, but please get your facts straight before writing something like this.
Asmodeus Sanity 2003-11-09 ch 8,	oh the last line was perfect. angry poem, i totaly get cha, i have family that are Xtreme christians. drives me crazy. tell someone who gives a **, cuz i dont, ya know? heh, some good points r in there too, but not all of them are that bad lol.
Asmodeus Sanity 2003-11-09 ch 5,	once again, good. the rhythm is sorta screwy, but thats ok. i lik the paragraphy thingie: It's too hard to let go Each day I need you more And more To get up Move on Emancipation From these invisible chains Escape from my own Self-inflicted misery and the end was also nice.
Asmodeus Sanity 2003-11-09 ch 3,	oh wow i realy like this one... the part Touch me Curse me Let it slip over me Love me Cut me Keep on using me Hold me Destroy me Leave me dead sorta reminds me of sweet gothic love of mine in a way... hmm. i like the lines: Strawberry Slices Numb me But you make me Feel the pain all over again brilliant. great job, will read more.
Asmodeus Sanity 2003-11-09 ch 2,	good poem, more like a song though. u say it duznt flow, but it does, just a little differently than in most writing. good job, and very relateable.
NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDo... 2003-10-22 ch 8,	Applauds Pretty much the way I feel. I was a former christian, the rest of my family still is, it ** me off when they always try to talk to me about God. They aren't extreme, unlike others I know, which is a bit relieving. Religion is just man made... I don't see why they try to force you to believe in their religion. I think a lot of them have to learn to back off and only offer their religion if someone wants to hear it. Great poem Tok
NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDo... 2003-10-22 ch 4,	Yeah, this is me often, lol. I like the way you made this. We're both somewhat alike. Tok
NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDo... 2003-10-22 ch 2,	This poem doesn't flow well, you say? Well I thought it did flow nicely, even though I'm not a fan of one-random-word-per-few-lines, but that's just me. It is a beautiful poem though, and I liked it a lot. :) Tok
Darkangel Rose 2003-10-10 ch 4,	OOh! I thought this was going to be another poem sans hapiness, but I guess I was wrong. That last stanza completely alters the tone of this poem, but in a good way. Also, the sort of off-screen sensuality is so much preferrable to specific descriptions, which would have ruined the entire feel of it. It just ... made me feel like the people in this poem really ahve something together. I liked that a lot. Great job.
Darkangel Rose 2003-10-10 ch 3,	O.o EEp. Dark poem. Did you mean to capitalize 'Ice' in the first line? There's nothing wrong with that, I'm just curious. I wasn't sure how I felt about this one 'til I got to the lines: "I'm not a burden Anyone should bear Strawberry Slices Numb me" Which I just ADORED! ^^ Lovely poem. Morbid and gruesome and YAY!
Darkangel Rose 2003-10-10 ch 2,	"Make me your puppet Glued together by your strings Force a performance Fuel the flame Whisper you'll catch me Let me fall" This line, strictly speaking was the one that I found most original and moving. The entire poem, of course, was wonderful, but that stanza really stuck in my mind. It's the diction (word choice) I think. I can just imagine that this would be an excellent poem to preform spoken aloud ... I just love the contrast between the last two lines of that stanza. "Show me What I have been neglected Let me be consumed by You" I'm not sure if 'neglected' is exactly what you would want to use in that line gramatically, but I haven't heard how it would be read aloud so I can't really say. ~ Phew. Now that I'm done with all that anal-retentive analysis, I can freely tell you that this is a very, very good poem. The subject is overused, but you brought it into a sort of different interpretation that I found refreshing.
Jess 2003-09-21 ch 14,	I'm just reviewing a whole lot, aren't I? Yes, well...I liked this poem. It was sad, and yet, at the same time, angry. I felt bed for whoever the "I" was in the story. I could almost feel their pain. Side question, though... was this about the holocaust?
Jess 2003-09-21 ch 8,	0_0 Wowzers. Were you angry when you wrote this? I'm not saying I disagree, as I don't like being pestered by Christians, but you sounded really **. Let it all out... ^_^
Jess 2003-09-21 ch 2,	Hey! I really liked your poem 'Broken'. It was really good. (Take that as a compliment, I don't usually like poetry.) Ok, I'm going to read more of your stuff! Jess
Catch Ya Later Alligator 2003-09-16 ch 9,	Holy crap, I LOVE THIS ONE! I don't know why I like it more than the others, but I really do. I love that last bit in particular. I'm glad you've put all these poems up here for us to read, and as I go along, I'm surprised you don't have more reviews.

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