i really like this one. it rhymes and i love how in the end u say the girl is really yourself and you express how you felt threwout the poem. its good. keep it up

wow this is amazing there arent words to describe it...

I loved this poem. It's like my life story...yeah, sorta. If you exclude the drinking, being abused and having a child part. But I loved this poem so much, I'm adding this to my favorites. Great job!

luvs

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