...I just lived through something like this. It hurt like allhells. And what you say is perfectly true. It hurts, and you're fighting, but you still need their friendship...Very nice.

I LOVE THIS LINE IN PARTICULAR..
damaging not the surface but the soul
VERY BEAUTIFUL
~JESSIKA~

Very nice, love it!(not as much as the other but still!) I read your bio again, you like vampires? I only read 24 7 about them! You should read, the silver kiss,(don't know the author) by author now, Amelia Atwater Rhoades, LJ Smith, Christopher Pike. These are great books and I HIGHLY recommend them! I also like Angel Sanuary (how ever you spell it) So far I only have seen pics but I love them!

You're sending a mixed message in this poem -- you're angry at person X for what he said, but you're sorry at whatver YOU did to make him say it?

It seems more like a desperation attempt at a friendship even with whatever conflicts are present.

Poetry-wise, the flow wasn't good, it was a very general poem, one that the theme has been done many many times. Simple vocabulary, which isn't a bad thing, but there is really no impact in this poem. No lines that stand out, anything like that.

For future reference, I'd try to be slightly more specific in what you're talking about, and create more flow in the writing itself. Use imagery, personification, metaphors, alliteration, actual poetry techniques. Freestyle can be good, but this has already been done many times.

A good attempt, though. I'll give you that.

I love this poem, it expresses the two sides to a friendship gone wrong in the one person. It is great and it is just what I needed to read right now. Keep writing

i think a lot of people could relate to this. its good

nice...