They're really good lyrics - I'd love to hear this sung. There's a lot of beautiful imagery and passion in the song and I love the sense of rhythm too, nothing sounds awkward or out of place. It's almost sad, but very strong too. I like it a lot.

I like this one, the sentance 'wishing upon a million stars seems to be me only dreaming.' really caught me. a love that dull the mystics of the night sky is amazing but a love that can make them shine brighter is one of the wonders of the world, something most people only see once in their lifetime. lol now I'm being sappy!