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| Twilightloverkaren 2008-05-04 ch 23,  | abuseThis story is really good and if the story was more drawn out and if there was some more information on the civil war I think it could be published. |
| Bluestreamer 2007-06-15 ch 24, | abuseHello there, Well I do love this story now. It's wonderful and has enough "magic". :) But the main reason i wanted to review besides complimenting your story is to ask if you have read "Kindred"? It's the book about an African American Woman who goes back in time to the Civil War Era. I think its an amazing book and I think you would like it too. Well thats all. :) |
| Tempest116 2007-03-11 ch 24, | abuseThat was a beautiful story. I'm glad she got Al got her benji in the end. ^_^ |
| betalight 2006-12-22 ch 24, | abuseAww...that was a cute story! |
| betalight 2006-12-22 ch 4, | abusewow - kinda stinks to be brought to that point in the past. |
| betalight 2006-12-22 ch 1, | abuseI like how you began it with a legend - its interesting! |
| R. Hanks 2006-05-10 ch 24, | abuseLoved it! Loved it! Loved it! It was so good i just loved everything about it! thankyou for such a great story and great characters n especially for the happy ever after ending! ver the best! love Rachi x |
| AmbrosiusEmrys 2005-11-26 ch 24, | abuseit's nice |
| LilLaTLuv 2005-07-28 ch 24, | abuseHey! That was a beautiful story!! Wonderfully crafted and perfectly executed!! I'm so glad that you wrote it! Wonderful job!! Keep up the great work! Luv ya,Tashi :) |
| becxfok01 2005-05-04 ch 24, | abuseAww, another sweet story. You must really like the whole time traveling concept. I liked the idea of using the Egyptian goddess. Anyways, well done on this story. |
| WeasleyTwinsLover1112 2004-05-31 ch 24, | abuseOh this was so good! Sorry I didnt review earlier but my comp got a virus then I moved and had to wait for 3 weeks to get the net!! *~* Dy *~* |
| Chione 2004-05-29 ch 24, | abuseI LOVE IT! WAH! I don't want it to be over! It's so good! Wow, you updated really fast too, and then finished it in less than a year! I'm really impressed! So keep writing, and that sequel sounds nice. . . . |
| ItalianQT 2004-03-26 ch 24, | abuseI thought your story was so cute! I was gonna be so furious if you didn't put them together!! lol Great story! : ) |
| Morning Mist 2004-03-23 ch 24, anon. | abuseWell done, all around. I'll be looking forward to either the sequel, Cassara, or (hopefully) both. ^_^ |
| hearthands 2004-03-22 ch 24, | abuseAww, *tear* another end of another brilliant story. Well, if you ever make a sequel count on me on reading it! Oh and I'll try and read your new story too. lol. Mk, mucho love~* |