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| Arynnl 2003-07-17 ch 1,   | i love this poem, the topic is one of the best parts, kids today are growing up faster and faster, its depressing. |
| Toad-Frog 2003-07-09 ch 1, | Execllent job! |
| glitterjewele 2003-06-30 ch 1, | awesome. the contrast between the stanzas in this one really made me do a double-take. this part: "whispered through intoxication/calculating observation" particularly fascinated me. and of course, ever and always, your rhythm is astounding and captivating. liked it muchly. ;) |
| ColorCrayons 2003-06-23 ch 1, | really interesting and really good, i liked it bunches, so true also. childhood...i guess in reality i kind of am a child? does sixteen count? o well, anyway, it was good. whoops...wait...English accent? um... jolly good poem i liked reading it bunches...cheery-o |
| Baby Milo 2003-06-23 ch 1, | Aw, that's really sweet and really good! |
| just-smile 2003-06-22 ch 1, | yah man, childhood was the best. I hate knowing what I know about the world... Good poem |