i love this poem,
the topic is one of the best parts,
kids today are growing up faster and faster,
its depressing.

Execllent job!

awesome. the contrast between the stanzas in this one really made me do a double-take. this part: "whispered through intoxication/calculating observation" particularly fascinated me. and of course, ever and always, your rhythm is astounding and captivating. liked it muchly. ;)

really interesting and really good, i liked it bunches, so true also. childhood...i guess in reality i kind of am a child? does sixteen count? o well, anyway, it was good. whoops...wait...English accent? um... jolly good poem i liked reading it bunches...cheery-o

Aw, that's really sweet and really good!

yah man, childhood was the best. I hate knowing what I know about the world... Good poem