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Medron Pryde 2003-12-23 . chapter 1
Everyone should have someone near to support them when they are weak. Been there. Done that. It's good to have friends.
Kyalia 2003-08-13 . chapter 1
I like; it definitely has a good rhythm.
Animagess 2003-07-20 . chapter 1
The emotions come through strongly, with a rather strange last line. The rhythm sounds kind of like rap...
ionlyliveindreams 2003-07-13 . chapter 1
Woah... That is great. I love part about you being a soldier and how you have to be a survivor... Very true and very cool... I also like the rhyme... Good job
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams
MiroFTW 2003-06-22 . chapter 1
the feeling of depression. not a good feeling man but sometime in life its bound to happen. glad it happened sooner than later. ive had it before.. so i guess i can relate i guess. just try and keep your cool and act normal. you should be fine..
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