FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Medron Pryde 2003-12-23 ch 1,   | Everyone should have someone near to support them when they are weak. Been there. Done that. It's good to have friends. |
| Kyalia 2003-08-13 ch 1, | I like; it definitely has a good rhythm. |
| Animagess 2003-07-20 ch 1, | The emotions come through strongly, with a rather strange last line. The rhythm sounds kind of like rap... |
| ionlyliveindreams 2003-07-13 ch 1, | Woah... That is great. I love part about you being a soldier and how you have to be a survivor... Very true and very cool... I also like the rhyme... Good job Keep writing ~ionlyliveindreams |
| MiroFTW 2003-06-22 ch 1, | the feeling of depression. not a good feeling man but sometime in life its bound to happen. glad it happened sooner than later. ive had it before.. so i guess i can relate i guess. just try and keep your cool and act normal. you should be fine.. |