Really powerful Poem.

Everyone should have someone near to support them when they are weak. Been there. Done that. It's good to have friends.

I like; it definitely has a good rhythm.

The emotions come through strongly, with a rather strange last line. The rhythm sounds kind of like rap...

Woah... That is great. I love part about you being a soldier and how you have to be a survivor... Very true and very cool... I also like the rhyme... Good job

Keep writing

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the feeling of depression. not a good feeling man but sometime in life its bound to happen. glad it happened sooner than later. ive had it before.. so i guess i can relate i guess. just try and keep your cool and act normal. you should be fine..