Reviews for A PUFF of SMOKE - FictionPress.com

GrungeIsDead 2003-08-01 ch 2,	Lol. That's funny. Just grammer, w/e, gramar is annoying, isn't it? Lol!
The Dark Swordsman 2003-07-03 ch 1,	I see why you got a perfect score. This is good! Now I don't know if you like demon stories, but I've got one on the site called Obsidian. Please, read and review if you'd like. By the way, I am Azarius' best friend. Ask him, he'll tell you! Until next time, I must resheath my sword... The Dark Swordsman
Brooke ORiley 2003-06-24 ch 2,	wow, good for you, you know how to use those words correctly! there are few people who do! i musta missed it when i read...oh, well, i was tired, give me a break.
Brooke ORiley 2003-06-23 ch 1,	interesting...but good. i like it. ok, um...more commas in your dialogue would be good, also you might wanna try and find some proper rules for writing dialogue, basically the parts where the speaking stops and you tell who was speaking...that could use some polishing. but other than that, this was a good story, and you should definitely keep writing!
GrungeIsDead 2003-06-23 ch 1,	Oh! I like this story! It's really well done! Its good that you got a perfect score for this, it's really good! Can't stop saying it... Hee hee! I'll review some of your other stuff! Toodles!
romanticvomitx 2003-06-23 ch 1,	ooh...i like this one! and thank you so much for adding me to youre fave authors list! ^_^