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| Isabella MacElfrish 2003-10-20 ch 1, | Very nice. It puts me in the mind of something Henry Wadsworth Longfellow once wrote about daffodils (I think it was him, anyway). Your imagry was excellent and it flowed very nicely. I think you're the one who asked about my name, if not I apologize for mixing you up. Anyway, my name on this site is Isabella because I named myself after a song by the Mediaeval Baebes of that same title. (The song is in Mordern Italian) Anyway, good poem. i liked it. Keep up the good work |
| Raymond Lamar Gilstrap 2003-07-02 ch 1, | Pretty cool. Thanks for reviewing obsession. I appreciate it. Yeah, I'm not too good with poems. But, I try. I got one more to write in obsession. Hope it is better than the first one. Anyway, chapter nine is up. So check it out. Again, wonderful poem. |
| umdahl 2003-07-02 ch 1, | That is so beautiful - I love all the adjectives. It makes me think of gorgeous summer day. |
| Kendra Alagondar 2003-06-24 ch 1, | I like it, very pretty. I wish I could describe things as well as you do in my poems, alas that is where I lack the most. Anyway, I like it. ^_^ |
| swift sky silver 2003-06-23 ch 1, | let me answer that, it's good. i like how you described everything.=0) |
| Kezarahk 2003-06-22 ch 1, | Tis sweet. =) |