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| Modern Poet 2004-03-11 ch 4,   | Bravo! The metaphors and personifications are exellent! These are so professional and exhilerating to read! They deserve to be published! |
| Desert Wrath 2003-11-23 ch 4, | O_O...WOW! King Winter doesn't seem to nice, lol. That was a great description of winter. I felt cold just reading this poem. Well, actually, it could have been the fac that it is winter, but... You're a very talented writer! Keep on writing! -Desert Wrath |
| Desert Wrath 2003-11-23 ch 3, | Autumn was described very well in this poem. I liked how autumn was described as a princess! This was a great poem! -Desert Wrath |
| Desert Wrath 2003-11-23 ch 2, | I really like how summer was described! I also liked how summer was characterized as a prince. Great work! -Desert Wrath |
| Desert Wrath 2003-11-23 ch 1, | This poem sent many great images of spring to my mind! I also liked how spring was characterized into a queen. Great work! -Desert Wrath |
| Lishe 2003-10-13 ch 1, | Oh Joy of joys! THIS IS SUCH A PRETTY POEM!! ^_^ I love it, write more poems! Nature poems are always...so...good. *faints* |
| Timberly Rey 2003-10-05 ch 4, | Beautiful, I love them all. They are all very good, with good visualizations and wording. Thank you for posting them, and thank you for the review of my poem. --Timberly |
| amicusveritas 2003-09-24 ch 1, | Well done...as are all of your writings I have read thus far...Spring is indeed a time of renewal...in the natural world...animals give birth in the spring...on a natural cycle inherent in the genes of the animal world...had a feeling you might tie that in...include it...as always...enjoyed your work..thank you, amicus... |
| MyGodReigns 2003-09-21 ch 1, | This is really awesome! I find it difficult to write such long poetry but you do it with flowing grace and descriptions to spark the mind. Beautiful. *~CQ White Oleander CQ~* |
| Mortal 2003-09-13 ch 1, | Great, Nature girl. ;) r/r mine too.. ^^ |
| M.D. Cantine 2003-09-06 ch 4, | Very good. I like the titles of the poems a lot... veery good. Thanks for reviewing my poem. Very awesomely awesome... and now I have a suggestion for you... how about a poem, like this one, only about a day? Like a poem about the rising of the sun, the midday, etc. I think you'd do it well. |
| Thrift Whore 2003-09-02 ch 1, | Wow, this is a great poem. I love the feeling I get from it.. Most've the poems I've read have been dark and rather depressing.. This is a very nice change. Keep it up. :) |
| Romantic Squirrel 2003-08-30 ch 4, | Yet another excelent piece! |
| Romantic Squirrel 2003-08-30 ch 3, | My fav! |
| Romantic Squirrel 2003-08-30 ch 2, | This one is better than spring, great job people great job |