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| Soichiro X 2004-02-26 ch 4,   | I love how it ended and the way that the following stories are now set up. You have the perfect sense of humor to go along with the subject. I.E. "** ironic " he said as he stood for a moment. Then he fell to the floor. John looked down at him, then he looked at his own hands, doctors hands. "Yes it is" he whispered before losing consciousness. I loved every minute of it. I'll be patiently waiting for the next addition to the series. |
| Soichiro X 2004-02-25 ch 3, | Very, very good. I love how this is developing and it's so completely original. It all adds up to a very compelling story. I love the part where Scapel said: --"Coincidence is what stupid people believe in when they don’t realize someone else is controlling their lives."-- It just sorta reminded me of what a discordian once told me. "There is no coincidence, only synchronicity." It the immortal words of Eddie Izzard: "Well done. Well done indeed." |
| Aran Tera 2003-07-02 ch 1, | Wow. Amazing first chapter, or part. I'll have to read the otehr parts some otehr time, but keep up the writing! |
| Morgan Gabriela 2003-06-26 ch 4, | Excellent story. I look forward to the next. You have talents as a writer. |