Lost? Uh oh. Are you in trouble again?

Kinda makes me think of how I keep on getting these moments when I could write a novel in one sitting if i ONLY HAD AN IDEA! I feel like I've completely run dry...

Anyway, the only bit i don't get is "panic(e?)" Nice mood.

this is incredibly well written, you really know how to draw me inside using your poetry. keep it up. XP

Interesting poem. Short and meaningful. I liked the ending especially. And to clear up your spelling query, it's panic :) Good work, keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*

Being sad and lost and melancholy is not fun. If you really are sad, then please find something to be happy about. It's no fun to mope around. Trust me I know. Very good poem.

Later, Lancer!

Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame

(P.S. Are you doing anymore with that one poem, Whack?)

Very deep. It was so simple, but the message was so strong. Great job!

It makes me think of night whispers. Sort of like the cold sweat that forms on your back when you think you may have forgotten to do something that day or for tomorrow. Great poem.

Short, but strong. very good.