Cool, battles, death, saddness. All the right material for an epic poem. Keep up the good work. P.S. *Strangle, Strangle*

This was great! Really nice topic. Keep up the good work!

awesome poem! wonderfully written, filled with emotion, totally heartfelt. and i think i know what character from some book this is based on. ^_^ it is, isn't it? anyway, i like this a lot! great job! keep on writing!