Wow! I loved it! The monologues were fantastic and just the dialouge in general flowed so smoothly and everything! The story was solid, and I also liked the themes and messages you had going on (a bit depressing, hmm?)! Well organized and put together. Moreover, I must applaud you for ACTUALLY putting in stage directions and having Acts and Scenes at plausible lengths (instead of extremely short scenes or Acts without scenes at all). It's a very good play and I was just curious if you did any theater work or were involved in a drama club or something, because you really seemed to know what you were doing. Anyway, hope to read something else from you soon!