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| Edainme 2003-09-12 ch 12, | Hey! I just anted you to know that I really like your story. I hope you update soon! Colton sounds like a total babe! Sorry, couldn't help that, but he does. Anyway, the story is cute, it sounds like me and my friends. |
| MandyHubbard 2003-09-10 ch 12, | hey! ok, well that's the end, but im liking it. I really want more colton scenes! I love his name. SO original. Some day im going to have a boy named Colton and a girl named Halley. Yay. lol. as if that's related. Great story though, i'll author alert list you. lol Panda |
| MandyHubbard 2003-09-10 ch 6, | hmm... it didn't really make sense why everyone came up to her. For one, why would they care? She didn't like throw a chair at the teacher, she passed a note. and for two, why her and not the others? Her reasoning didn't make sense, really. I mean, i was like her- in honors classes, FFA classes, etc where i knew everyone, but that wouldnt have happened to me. Plus, her friends already know her-the way she explained it was like they didn't know what classes she was in! Anywho, just wanted to point that out, cus i appreciate when other people point things otu to me. hOpefully that wasn't harsh. ANywho, on to the next chapter! liking this story, thus far. :) |
| MandyHubbard 2003-09-10 ch 1, | HEY! this is a great start... i like how much contrast you put between teh two girls. And m, colton sounds delicious. LOL. ON to the next chapter! Panda |
| Angry Bob 2003-09-02 ch 12, | First off, my fave two quotes: "She was wondering if it was really coffee" and "She had minus and hour and a half to get to first period." I feel like that a lot, LOL. Anyway, this story's pretty good, and I like it. It's not a romance like the normal kind, but there is some definate sexual tension thing going on, and I like how you mostly hear just the thought of the main character, but then, you also hear of Colton's inner thoughts, which you do really well, not cheesy or anything at all. Anyway, I really liked it, enough to check back later, so keep at it! -AB P.S. Thanx for not only reviewing my story, but saying such nice things about me on your bio - I really appreciate it! |
| mar 2003-08-30 ch 11, | this is really good, very funny and easy to read. you have a great talent for writing! update soon! |
| Secretive 2003-08-16 ch 10, | This is a good story. Yeah, it's a plot or idea that's a classic, but sometimes classics come out really good. Anyways, I like your story and Colton sounds very cool. But what's going on in Laura's home life? |
| HereComesTheSun 2003-08-11 ch 12, | Wow, this story is really good! I love it! |
| I-Wuv-Muffins 2003-08-07 ch 12, | OOh cool! Heh, I know hoe it is when I get writers block! It most definitely DOESN'T rock my socks when I get it either! Oh well... ^_^ |
| Hurleychic12 2003-08-06 ch 12, | Great chapter! They did need to apologize...I wouldn't have had the guts to do so tho..ah well. I tried to post another chapter to my story yesterday, but it won't let me! And it wouldn't let me today! It's makin me mad! But I really love the story! Can't wait to read more! |
| Autumn tears 2003-07-29 ch 12, | Yes! Another chapter, *cheers*! Writers block sucks, majorly sucks... I'm not to good at giving people ideas but: Whats going on with Laura's mom? She's acting strange, maybe you could go into that more in the next chapter? You said this was like a semi-biography thing about stuff that happened to you, just write what comes to mind I guess... argh? See, I'm horrible at giving adivice. Just please, please, don't adbandon the story, it's getting really good :D |
| evanescent 2003-07-27 ch 12, | aw this is nice so far. sorta reminds me of the stuff that went on in my middle school! |
| fchan1810 2003-07-26 ch 12, | This is really good. Please update soon. |
| attempting writer 2003-07-26 ch 12, | oopz! i didn't look, so i reviewed for what i thought was the last chapter. oh well at least you get an extra review! anyway, i think you are doing a great job so far, the chapters are a little short but if you can do a bunch of short ones in a few dayz thats great :D. i tottaly agree about the asprin for writerz block thing. lol. it happens to me too much... maybe you should create some kind of drama that happens at detention like she passes out and he must do mouth to mouth , joking! but if you think on it i am sure you will come up with something great! better than i could anyway. i am going to end this review now, later. |
| attempting writer 2003-07-26 ch 11, | i like your story alot. i never have anything good to say in reviews :( oh well. keep updating. |