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| Searon 2004-12-16 ch 1,   | i like it |
| avidelecteur 2003-11-08 ch 1, | Very nice. The poem makes a triangle. hehehehehehe. It does tho. It's skinny at the top and fat in the middle and skinny again at the bottom. *looks wonderingly* I think I've had too much sugar. Or too little sleep or something. ~avidelecteur |
| Deana Bell 2003-07-13 ch 1, | O...Angsty and cool. Great style. ~God bless~ |
| goddessofsnark 2003-06-30 ch 1, | Wow, that was really good. It's really cool how you captured how someone could be so totally in love with someone they know are hurting them. Very good! |
| Suicidal Butterfly 2003-06-25 ch 1, | beautiful. I like the way you explained yourself at the bottom. Not that I didnt understand but a lot of us are offended by dumb things like that *rolls eyes*. Tori Amos II |
| Kyalia 2003-06-23 ch 1, | I like-- it does describe that feeling quite well. |