Reviews for Here She Lies - FictionPress.com

glitterjewele 2003-07-27 ch 1,	ah, very nice. there is a very strong essence of depression lacing this one, which really adds to the piece, i'd say. i thought it got better and better the more you wrote. a good rhythm running throughout bonus points! :) i read it through slowly the first time to grasp the meaning of the lines, and then i read it through again quickly and it flowed very well. sections rather than individual lines stood out for me in this piece. perhaps my favorite of them was: Here we stand Here we cry Here we sleep Here she lies that one was just perfect in all aspects, rang when i read it, each line carried quite a bit of impact, and changing the 'we' to 'she' in the last of them really hit home. other favorite bits were: "hopeless," "beneath a canopy of silk and tears," and "seeing life shattered." very solid piece here. good job, chica. :)
Suicidal Butterfly 2003-06-25 ch 1,	I like this one a lot. Reminds me a bit of myself.
Kyalia 2003-06-23 ch 1,	When new ideas occur, add another chappie. That's what I do.