I think you should write more poetry. This is a gorgeous piece of work, with stunning effects.

Interesting. I don't normally read/review poetry but I have been so desperatefor anything worth reading and I'm a fan of your work so I figured that I wouldn't be let down. I was right. ;)Nice write - again you've cured my chronic boredom.

I love it- I can feel what you're trying to say
- nice write