This is the first time I actually read a poem on FictionPress and I can say that this is really good. It's sweet and touching and I love it. Great job!

T.T oh god, tt is TRAGIC! *WAILZ* i wanna cry now! T.T sad! *sobz* i'll go curl up in a corner and cry now, byebye.

that was one of the best poems i've ever read on death, it describes the feeling so acurrately!
My mother died when I was twelve, and at that time in life, it's so hard to understand it. My stepmother, however, is one of those people the world could do without.
Good writing, even though I must have gone through half a kleenex box.
Katerina

**, I'd PAY to see my father dead.

I'm sorry. you are really wonderful with words. I was crying, still am...

It is rare indeed that a poem can induce me to tears like this.
This was so heartwrenching - beautifully written, but so heartbreaking! =(

Well done. The last line however,was what really crowns the entire peice.

Beautiful.

;-; Aw... *starts to cry* This is too sad for me.

You're work is amazing. ^_^ You are no doubt one of my favorite authors.

~Tk