I'm never one for love poems but this is so sweet.. It has this really cute tone to it, conveying the shyness of the poet.. Its really interestin how you manage to make the piece sound so innocent.. Good.. =)

it's beautiful! i love this! :D

That she do

Beautiful poem. You convey that emotion of wanting to let someone know how you feel about them, but being afraid to do so, very well. I know I can relate to that feeling. Great work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

very sweet and beautiful. i like it! keep up your writing!

Aw...I really can relate to the feelings you describe! Very well done!!

Another beautiful piece by our Grendel
This was a very sweet and moving piece...well done

Lots of Love
Blessed-goddess
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