well i can relate only too well, beautiful poem, excellent rhyming.

Great poem! Very good rhyming.

Perfect again. It makes me.. swim in that feeling. That hope in hopelessness. It's... there are so many deaths that are worse than death. And when he doesn't realize how much of an impact he made... that's one of them.

I enjoyed your poem. I can't say that I relate, I have never cried over a women but then again I am a cold hearted person. None the les the poem is short sweet and too the point. I even took a copy for my own private collection