this is most excellent, don't we all know how this feels. i know i do, all too well. nice work. thanks for reviewing my poem.
~jrl

just a btw, the second line, i think you meant "at" not "it". excellent poem, hurts doesn't it though, yeah i've been there, i'm sure lots of people have.

Oh yeah, by the way, we're living parallel lives.

Yeah... that's... yeah. That's exactly how it is right now, you know? As though I weren't frickin here. And I'm not, you know, cause he's looking elsewhere. And that was inspirational, and it's definitely something I'll end up quoting the next time I see him. Perfect.

Nice job!! My god, this poem is so powerful. I love it! The wording reflects exactly what goes through one's mind in this kind of situation. It's just fabulous. Great job!


Sarah