I don't know if it's just me or not, but I had the strange feeling the poem was hopping merrily along. Which is a good thing. Poems should be merry at all they do.

fun :)

haha, I thought the rhyme was clever! good poem.

"Life's too much like dice"

Can I quote you on that?

I really liked that line. I'd say original, but then, should I give you that much credit?

Well, you know what, since I've read this poem, and I'm impressed with the form, and consistency (which I don't have) Yes, I will.

You're REALLY good. And to top that off, you're funny. Damn you.

Anywho, this is great. I'm going to go click on your name now and check yah out.

Good Job.

Ew, yes, you're right, it is sick. But amusing. H he ;+)

Heehee! I luv it. Really funny and true too. i think you'de like the song 'They're Coming to Take me Away' sorry I don't know who wrote it but it's you're style.