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| Asha M. Night 2004-09-18 ch 1,   | I can tell this cannot be just a story. It must hold some truth. It's very good. The visual is grim, but very alluring. Well that's only if you find blood and the like sensual. The words you have chosen fit quite well and good luck in your future additions to the site. If this is a story...I hope to read more. |
| FoxxieFantasy 2003-10-22 ch 1, | whoa. this made my skin crawl. blood.ah. lots of meaning in this. i dont blame ya for getting creeped out...ya...its very...*wish i knew the word*...i dont think i'd forget this poem(or at least wht it said). good job. lol. |
| dealated 2003-06-24 ch 1, | beautiful. i can almost relate (almost, cause im still here). you really put it into context. good work. ~melia |