kinda scary, but wonderfully written, and you've managed to portray the character perfectly.

Dude? Are we channeling each other?

I have a poem ... similar to this subject plot ... just not the plan. I was partial to an axe.

Anywho, your poetic side shows clearly through this piece! I can hear it ... its a bit muffled because of the form but, its there. That's REALLy cool (It's really late and I can't seem to make up some really cool original complimenting phrase.)

Good Job .. will continue reading now...

wow that was really good and pretty scary