 Amethyst Blood 2003-07-02 . chapter 1That was great. I understood most of it. You have great imagery. It reminds me of the Nittle grasper songs on Gravatation (Smile as you become reborn and paint your whole body
See the world suddenly burning up miraculously as we met by chance
I see you haven't changed at all; the petals scatter from the flower
Polish the gem in your hand everyday so it will build up and start over )
that's a great poem!
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