I don't know why, but "a sea of stars" made me think of a swimming pool, shattering my image of the deadly midnight sky. And I didn't really like the last line. But this is purely all in my mind.

I loved the first line.
It was so beautiful...

Okay and Short

This was a lovely depiction of the moon.

~*~AbunaiChikara

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Wow... I love the way you describe the moon. I never thought of it as a flowing orb before. Beautiful. Well done.

wonderful haiku! beautiful, love the imagery, nicely described. great job!

AAw, this is beautiful..."sea of stars"...love the image...cool!

~Stoffpferd~

Very nice.


~Heart of the Sword

beautiful... i love the moon...

I really like this! I especially love the last line as it is usually the sun that is protrayed in this manner. An excellent description of the moon, this is!