Well done on this peace, its nicely written. It flows well and I enjoyed the rhyming. Keep it up. Its a shame to waste good talent. Think of what we may have missed out on in those 2 years you forgot about fictionpress!! LoveAshleighp.sShine Brightly

I can see why this is your favorite, it's quite a good poem!

you poked fun well! :)

You slew the Phoenix on this one. Nice job.

i think this was good. it was a little short, but i guess that is ok. nice rhynming pattern.

awesome poem! i love this piece a lot. great use of imagery and nice rhyming. also, it has a good rhythm and flow to it. great job! keep writing!

oh... pretty... much better than anything i could ever do >_<
very touching and well written. the brevity of the lines also made me think of how short life is. or maybe school has made me too analytical... :)
*gives chocs*

Wow. Another great, moving poem by the amazing PhoenixSlayer! This poem seems to reflect the emotions and feeling of life and death, and even the mysterious belief of reincarnation. Definitly true to your penname, it reminds me of the Phoenix, mythical creature to rise from the ash. Amazing poem, girl, you can work wonders with words!

-FuuHououji

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Right...This is really good. You had good rythme and you didn't stray from the topic(lots of people do when they're talking of ). Sounds kinda like something from LOTR.