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| Acid Sky 2006-02-08 ch 1,  | abuseI really like this story. You have a few errors, but nothing a quick beta-read couldn't fix. I wanted to thank you for that review, and return the favor as you asked ;) I'm at school right now, but when I have more time I'll go read your other works. Ta,Acid |
| skizofrenik 2005-04-05 ch 1, | abuseGood story so far with lots of dialogue! I just wanna let you know that the next chapter of Dinner With Satan is up, and I would also be interested if you could tell me the words in my story that are out of context! That would be really helpful! ;) |
| StarRise 2004-10-28 ch 1, | abuse*curious look* And have you just abandoned this one, or is this one of those ones that has a writerblock demon haunting it? It looks really good. But then, I am a sucker for anything fiction/fantasy/sci-fi/supernatural that looks like it has a potential love plot in it somewhere (do notice how nothing that I write escapes this little feature)... |
| Sarah Yearwood 2003-08-02 ch 1, | abuseHey! I like this story. Merrick, huh? OOh, nothing, just wondering where you got that interesting little name. Very good story though. I'm a fan of Skript Talker's, and I do read the reviews. Maybe Skript Talker would enjoy this story! Please please please update soon! I'm dying to hear more about Kindra and Merrick. This is an excellent story. Perhaps you would enjoy my stories. Well, my story. Tales of a Vampire. Possibly my best work. Not entirely sure about that, to be honest. I do have another story, but I'm not lusting to write more like I used to be. Anyways, so read it and tell me what you think. Hope you enjoy! *Countess De Lioncourt* P.S: Just asking, would Merrick happen to be inspired by Anne Rice? I'm a huge fan of hers as well! Just asking though! *CDLC* |
| Skript Talker 2003-07-29 ch 1, | abuseWell, well...you've really got some story here. I'm absolutely interested to see where it goes and I already love the opening chapter. All I can really tell you is update soon and maybe stop by to read my new updates once in a while...take that as an invitation. :)lol |
| Sierra Black 2003-06-26 ch 1, | abuseAh I see that you are using the name "Kindra" again, it is a rather good one isn't it. Did you just make this story up cause I don't believe I've read it before. It's very nice so far though the "Horror" label sort of put me off it.Now for the well rounded part of the review; some of the conversations have the same person talking twice in a row and you indented it both times. You only indent it if the person was not the last person to speak. Jess |
| La petite malaine 2003-06-25 ch 1, | abuseOh clancy you silly bird! you made soo many spelling mistakes! Oh well, you rock some serious **. |