 Monev11235 2007-04-14 . chapter 1So, uh...
Do you still use your FP account? |
 from beneath the bell jar 2006-01-17 . chapter 1tres cute - def reminds me of Shel Silverstein |
 hiddenpassions 2005-10-19 . chapter 1oh! this is so cute! i LOVE it! awesome writiing :D |
 Hana to Yume 2005-10-09 . chapter 1lol! Nice. ...Not much to say other than that. ^^: |
 Eternity's Angel of Mercy 2005-08-28 . chapter 1Very cute... Reminds me of those Shel Silverstein poems I was read when I was little. :) |
 An-Author-At-Heart 2005-08-10 . chapter 1LOL, that was cute. Short but sweet. Nice job. |
 Sad Statue 2005-07-31 . chapter 1That's a cute littlbe bit there, it reminds me a lot of my younger brother. Keep it up. ^_^ |
 Seleana 2005-07-31 . chapter 1Aw! I think its cute... it reminds me of my kid cousion...
^_^I usually act like that with my stuff too
Me- *randomly does crap on the Paint program*
My Mom- How beautiful!!
Me- O_O...what? |
 Ebony Stars 2005-07-27 . chapter 1lol, you are only as clever as people think you are I suppose. great poem, i like the humour and irony. |
 A B Lewis 2005-07-25 . chapter 1lol. i find this funny. But it's still pretty good. And no, it's not retarded. |
 Needa S 2005-07-24 . chapter 1Hehee...Very nice. Awesome job. Thank ya for the kind review. Keep'em coming.
Needa S. |
 FrozenKiwi 2005-07-24 . chapter 1Ha! That IS good! Reflections on modern art... heeheehee. |
 Whisper on the Lips 2005-07-23 . chapter 1IT's CHOCLATE AND MACARONI NOODLES!! A COLLAGE OF FINGER PAIN AND OLD COMICS! VAN GOUGH MEETS A BIG EXPLOSION! IT'S WOW! IT'S AMAZING!
it's a poem.
was i right? i like this poem, very cute. WRITE ON! (= |
 Maxwell K 2005-07-23 . chapter 1Very clever and funny! It reminds me alot of the work of shel silverstien, full of humor and classic. |
 butterflyofhazeleyes 2005-07-21 . chapter 1 I like it! I envy you for your talent of making things rhyme. I definitly have a problem with that. That's why none of my poems rhyme. If they did rhyme they would be dr. suess like. Good Job. Oh, and by the way, thanks for the review! |