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| worstwriteronfic 2005-10-04 ch 1, | abuseCool story |
| ForgottenHope 2005-07-09 ch 22, | abusethis story is so good! Skyler is so sweet and i can't wait to find out what happens with him and his 'family' and his 'relationship' with Victoria. keep up the good work and update soon, please! |
| oopsididitagain 2005-03-04 ch 22, anon. | abusewell, i like your story! and when are you going to update again? i really want Skyler to end up with Victioria you know? they're so cute together. And i hope Skyler will stop feeling guilty and stuff. Please please please update soon! *puppy dog face* |
| agela 2005-02-16 ch 22, | abuseplz hurry and update i really enjoy this story but i cant wait for u to long plz hurry! |
| city-gal7 2005-01-23 ch 22, | abusewhere are you?!!?! u haven't updated for '05! cmon..pleas updaet for ths story..its really cool. I can't believe Skyler cme back home...that's intresting...really!! i'll wait for teh next update (which i hope is soon.)! |
| Ashlita 2004-12-23 ch 22, anon. | abuseHey, it's been awhile! I'm so happy you updated. The love triangle (or whatever math shape has like a million sides) is getting huge. I don't know who I want to end up with who anymore. As long as they're happy, right? Well update soon. Merry Christmas! ~Ashlita |
| Tenshistar 2004-12-15 ch 22, | abuseThis is one of those stories that cpatures your attention and leaves you wanting more. I throughly enjoyed reading this and can't wait for the updates. You are gifted. I am not just saying that. |
| Estelle Stafford 2004-12-11 ch 22, | abuseThank you! I loved it of course, I didn't like waiting so much, but I love it enough to wait. I really enjoyed it. I love the characters |
| Tiffany20 2004-12-08 ch 22, | abusevery interesting story, i like it. The kissing isnt too hot though i think he should have sex with her than drop her ;) j/k but yes good read |
| Lisa 2004-12-08 ch 22, anon. | abuseHey girlie pants. Nice update! I updated too! Great chapter. I liked how he put on the clothes anyway. the only suggestion I have would be not to explain stuff like "we're a gang who holds our emotions at bay". you've shown that through their behavior and I like how his mom is trying. I wonder what's going to happen with Vicky. I don't think it would be too cliche if he ended with her, no offense to the reviewer who said that, just because she IS kinda snobby. he doesn't seem like the kinda guy to go for a snob so it'll be interesting to see what happens if they DO get together. anyway, great job. write more soon. ~Lisa~ |
| couch potatoe 2004-12-08 ch 22, anon. | abusehijust wanted to commend u on a really interestin nd gd story. Im a little confused about the final pairings, I would have thought it would b Victoria and Skyler after reading the summary, though i personally really dont like Victoria. She seems a bit...hmm how should i put...conceited and annoyin...nd thats puttin it lightly. If u actually put her as the main protaganist in the story then its a bit too 'mary sue' for me. However, I think the Anna and Skyler or Tony pairin is cool and refreashin. Anway, lookin forward 2 readin more chappies. Update soon. |
| wakefield2 2004-12-07 ch 22, anon. | abuseu updated! that's great...i'm your newest fan and i just finished uyr story...it was really cool! i can't believe that skyler would break up with victoria! is he dumb? well u will have them get back together okay? they're just SO sweet! |
| joker8baller 2004-09-15 ch 22, | abuse... when i saw author's note i thought u might announce u were stopping writing so i wuz going to swear like heck... U have a great story very few minor grammtical errors but a good story... keep up the good work |
| Estelle Stafford 2004-07-22 ch 21, | abuseAs usual good work |
| Eagle Seance 2004-07-06 ch 21, | abuseAre you SURE you don't want to turn this into a TV series? lol. That was great! It was just a bit difficult to keep up with all the characters, but i like the eternal triangles- reader suspense huh? will be back to read more when you update! |