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| Maria Regina 2007-09-18 ch 1,   | It's so... *speechless*. Very true. After suffering, there's hope, and after hope, there's salvation. |
| luv me like no other 2006-06-14 ch 1, | So depressing and breath-taking. This makes me feel so sad for her, but yet I feel as if she is really free. |
| C. J. Reams 2006-03-19 ch 1, | God, I love your poetry. You went through it, didn't you? |
| one_winged_angel_sephy 2005-06-16 ch 1, | its ok - be happy! this is so depressing |
| RiloKileyRocks 2005-02-13 ch 1, | Wow, I hope you got out of thet rut in your life. It reminds me of a freind I have. The depression eating you away... |
| Celestial Sailor 2003-10-21 ch 1, | By the time I reached the final words, I was already in tears at the eloquence of your writing style.. truly, it is unique and beautiful. The vivaciousness of your words runs through my subconscious at the cold marks left from my horrid childhood, reminding me just how lucky we are to be in democratic countries. Perhaps I should have mentioned in my bio that I'm an altruist who just recovered from a 2 year chronic depression period; in a way, opened up my heart to a new world of emotion and allowed me to write more indepth than I ever had. I wish you luck on another of your fine poems, (and although I'm only 16) I can see great potential to come for you. Just like my grandmother said before her passing, "What you give, you receive." Therefore, I am indebted to you for your review - it is like a long lost friend of mine reunited. -Matt |
| Kerbi 2003-06-25 ch 1, | beautiful |
| Euripides 2003-06-25 ch 1, | oh! that is so sad! it's a wonderful poem but terribly sad! *cries* it's so pretty! |