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| MercuryMoon 2005-04-16 ch 8,   | you updated!! *dances* awesome chapter this one is. I liked the conflict in this chapter of society vs love. Very cool. I didn't see your note that you re-uploaded everything, but I'll go read it right now. ^^ |
| MercuryMoon 2004-06-19 ch 7, | Heya! This is a really great story, so I hope you'll update soon... The characters all seem pretty cool, especially Remus. Heheh. |
| Lady Meriadoc 2003-10-18 ch 6, | Good job! |
| kohakunushi 2003-09-25 ch 1, | heyy!i didnt bother to sign in!! lolz! well.. i like this story alot! (i usually dont like stories... i HATE reading!) lolz... Remus... i heard that name be4... oh! was it Remus Lupin!?!?! :) :P ~YuRi |
| JazzeeT 2003-08-22 ch 4, | hmm this is an original. nice plot you have going here. i like the mix with greek mythology. its intersting. update soon |
| ParisianLoft 2003-07-31 ch 4, | It isn't a crappy chapter at all. It's very good. I know this is going to be interesting. Keep it up and I'll wait for chapter 5! |
| Snow Ivy 2003-07-27 ch 3, | I love what you have so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. The heroine is well done, presented in clear writing style, and her sister is almost perfect without being annoying about all. This piece of entertainment is something I thank you for. |
| ParisianLoft 2003-07-25 ch 3, | This is getting intresting. One tiny qualm, it wouldn't be Rome just yet, since Romulus hasn't killed Remus yet to claim the hill as Rome. Of course, you could be going in a different direction. But I care not and I am still enjoying this! |
| ParisianLoft 2003-07-25 ch 2, | Sorry I haven't reviewed sooner, I've been a bit busy. I still like it, and no it isn't bad, it's better than some stories out there. I like how you make her father the type of 'self-imposed poverty' king where their house is grand yes, but not a ridiculous palace. Augustus, I think, was like that. Now, on to chapter three and another review! |
| Larka 2003-07-05 ch 1, | Hi Bonnie! Interesting. Do you mean that you were thinking of this story for the whole test? Cause the question was the first question. If I did that I'd probably forget the whole plot. Anyhow, write more soon! |
| ParisianLoft 2003-06-27 ch 1, | I like this. It is an interesting piece and not very common. I like the idea that Romulus killed Remus over a woman rather than who would be emperor of Rome(I might've got that wrong, it has been awhile since I did a history course) but I did enjoy reading this and can't wait for the next bit! |