ooh... its a great message and i loved how the dream had that message... loved it... loved the imagery too.

sad and dark. I wonder if this is based on a true story, or something that happened in your life. Lots of people go through this and that's life, sorry if I seem like I'm making a speach, not tryiny/wanting to if I am. Lots of feeling and truth

This is a very powerful poem. I recently lost a friend to suicide, so I guess that's why this stikes me so hard.
I really enjoy your work, and hopefully some time soon I'll have the time to read all of your poems.

By Ra, that was very very nice. I'm sorry that you had to express what happened like this, but I'm glad you did. And I'm sorry that it did happen. This goes on my favorite stories list! Well done. So very well done. I love this one and it is definitely worth reading again and again because I understand it and that's pretty amazing on its own.

This really captures how someone might feel when ready to end it all. But then it also expresses that love of a friend.