ick. such a pretty image and then squish. this sounds like it should be an interlude in a story... nevermind the odd person trying to visualize an illustration...

the first part strangly reminded me of a stlye of writing Anne Rice might have used. in this case i love it, the violin, the feel, word choice was everything and you did it perfectly my dear.

ok i think i get the end now, took a little bit! Humans conqure all, and in their ignorance they will unknowingly destory every beauty left. or maybe it's just me. anyway great job, so a big concept in such a small poem. loved it.

Jasmine

Good work, I wasn't expecting that.

*walks by squashed cricket*

Ew...someone clean that mess up.

Heart of the Sword

LOL! I DEFINITELY wasn't counting on THAT to happen! _