Very clever ^_^ I quite enjoyed this, good job!

OMGOMGOMGHJFDSLAHFDSJKALFHDSKLA! That story is hilarious! I'm gonna add it to my favorites list!

OOkkaayy...weird...funni tho.

~LWG~

oh! i love it keep writing stories such as this one.. i adore it ...and im adding you to my favourite authors list and this story will be on my fave. story list too... i love it i truley do..
see yah
JP

Beautiful...just beautiful. I HATE IT when someone ties ME to a chair and won't stop poking me...although...he had his hands on my shoulder so...

Hahahaha! Sorry, but I have to agree with the characters, lol: It's confusing without *knowing* who's who. And Rahul and Mori sure care a heck of a lot about Brandon, don't they. *shakes my head* Some friends, ey? Lol, peace!

Amazing... This is rather like something I might have written in a bible study once. Only that was script-style so it doesn't work as well. ^_^