i'm gawking here. i know it's rude to stare, but... *gawk* (i'm an insane bird! hurrah!)
amazingly intense. :D

i like ur use of the phrase 'morbid ballerina'. too many big words though, it takes away from the experience of the poem, especially for simpletons like me. stop obfuscating!

Very sad, but very well written, and very deep.

CoolBeans18s

that was wonderfully written, but very sad.