nice nice. i like... is good...

Interesting poems. "Prelude To Hell" reminds me of a vampires for some reason.
Good job.

Hmm, I can sense the depressing undertones in this collection of poems. Nevertheless, they are still very good. Depression can create some really good works of art. I liked the first poem the best. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

This second one "When the vultures come" is a really strong critic, and I love it. Well done!

o i like this alot! your very talented ^..^ keep up the good work! umm do you think it'd be possible that you could read my poems 'Mirror on the wall' and 'Help', i would appreciate it, but i'll leave you alone now, bye bye!

i could accually picture all these things you were saying. its so good. i can prefectly understand this poem. i like it a lot. keep writing too!

nice poems. i like them. nicely written, nice rhyming. good job. keep on writing!