|Reviews for Unveil|
| Keep it 100 7/15/03 . chapter 1
Heart of the Sword
| Iameverything 7/10/03 . chapter 1
Thoughts on life put into perfect words.
| Wasted Postage 7/3/03 . chapter 1
Another simply stunning work! Excellent, excellent job! Simply marvelous!
| PainKiller 6/26/03 . chapter 1
This was just awesome. I just loved the structure of the poem, with the three lines per stanza. Each line... so full of emotion. I wish I could do that. I just can't say enough about the wording of this poem. Every line is a gem.
My two favorite parts were the second to the last stanza (because it's just so true), and the final line. I'm in such awe of your talent. Keep it up.