Beautifully written.


~Heart of the Sword

Thoughts on life put into perfect words.

Another simply stunning work! Excellent, excellent job! Simply marvelous!

~*~AbunaiChikara

This was just awesome. I just loved the structure of the poem, with the three lines per stanza. Each line... so full of emotion. I wish I could do that. I just can't say enough about the wording of this poem. Every line is a gem.

My two favorite parts were the second to the last stanza (because it's just so true), and the final line. I'm in such awe of your talent. Keep it up.