 laerai 2003-08-20 . chapter 1This was fantastic. I loved the rhyme scheme. And while all the other colors emphasize one thing, silver is the embodiment of so much. It really shows your love of it. |
 OJW 2003-08-17 . chapter 1Whow ! NICE POEM
I Love The descriptions, It's so beautiful and colorful!
You're such a great poet! I love your poems! :) |
 Sunflower Philosophy 2003-06-27 . chapter 1This is beautiful! The rhythm was catchy, and the rhymes were very good. I loved it, it was adorable.
m~* Sunflower, anyone? |
 Kerbi 2003-06-26 . chapter 1unusually creative! silvre is my fav too- silver glitter though. i was painting a picture frame for my cousin w/silver glitter the other day and i became oddly obsessed with it, lol |
 aulliana 2003-06-26 . chapter 1This is definitely going on my favourites list. It's been a while since I read rhyming poetry and I really like this. |