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Reviews For: Dragon and Moon
MagenDavid 2004-06-05 . chapter 1
"And the dragon shot an ice-cold flame,
It danced along the heavens frame"
My fav. lines.
AWESOME!
laerai 2003-08-20 . chapter 1
It seems like something an old bard would sing... it has a dreamy quality, and then the pop of the moon at the end... really wonderful. Like the moon is so dazzling, that even the sight of the dragon could not take away from its brilliance.
CoolBeans18s 2003-08-15 . chapter 1
Amazing! I really like it. It has a good rythm too...

~ CoolBeans18s
nightdragon0 2003-06-27 . chapter 1
Nice, sounds a lot like a myth.
aulliana 2003-06-26 . chapter 1
I like! This would make a great myth.
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