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a-Leng
2004-03-28
ch 1,
abuseHrm...it's a nice poem with a good poetic flow but what is it supposed to mean I wonder? s'all good though.
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【*~LuLu~*】
2003-07-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseohh~ such a lovely poem!! My favourite part is:

I know you’re there

The feeling seems so clear

But how can I know

If you never show



I cannot see, and I cannot touch

What I have isn’t so much

I love you, and that is all

Give it a try, and let me fall…

She should b a poemtess!! Mind I ask..what happened between u n tt?? >
forever-blues
2003-07-01
ch 1,
abusenice peom, had some changes, but still great...
BlueFire42
2003-06-26
ch 1,
abuseit's good- is this what you are really feeling towards this person though? I like the context of words you have used but maybe include more of a description
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