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| a-Leng 2004-03-28 ch 1, | abuseHrm...it's a nice poem with a good poetic flow but what is it supposed to mean I wonder? s'all good though. (^_^)v |
| 【*~LuLu~*】 2003-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseohh~ such a lovely poem!! My favourite part is: I know you’re there The feeling seems so clear But how can I know If you never show I cannot see, and I cannot touch What I have isn’t so much I love you, and that is all Give it a try, and let me fall… She should b a poemtess!! Mind I ask..what happened between u n tt?? > |
| forever-blues 2003-07-01 ch 1, | abusenice peom, had some changes, but still great... |
| BlueFire42 2003-06-26 ch 1, | abuseit's good- is this what you are really feeling towards this person though? I like the context of words you have used but maybe include more of a description |