This is so sad. The simplistic style of the poem makes it very powerful and conveys the message across very strongly. Beautiful, keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*

I love the title and the way you used it in the poem. How sad...

hey thats wicked good. Read my stuff if you want but if u do please review it and let me know what you think. you might like them cuz most of my poems are about love n stuff. peace ..:recalcitrant:..

I love the line breaks and the entire feeling of this poem. I think it has a beautiful melody to it. I'm putting it on my favorites.

Mellow...I like that feeling _. This poem just works out very well! I can't think of anything that I would change, except in the second stanza where you use "I lie Crying" and "all the lying". the sound "lie" is being used a tad too much, but that's just me. Maybe "I stand crying" instead" I dunno, it's just what I think. Good poem! Keep on at it!