Well, you have more poetic bones and nerves than I do. It was a good poem whether you say it is or not. Lovely poem.

~*~AbunaiChikara

hey thats wicked good. Read my stuff if you want but if u do please review it and let me know what you think. you might like them cuz most of my poems are about love n stuff. peace ..:recalcitrant:..

Yes you do have that. this is a great poem. I realy enjoyed reading this. keep up the good work!! your poetry is fine